Blog #5

I think that these essays showed me a lot about the essay I wrote. One thing that stuck out to me is that I need to focus one organizing my essay. Also, a lot of these people were really good at making the evidence not too long and I need to make sure to focus on this. I think it was cool to see the differences in ideas in all four of the essays and the fact that we were all still on prompt. My essay is much longer than all of these which makes me question whether or not I expanded too much on unimportant ideas, so I hope someone mentions that on my comments when I get my essay back. This showed me a lot of things that I should improve on in my essay, so I think it was definitely beneficial.